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20 June 2014 @ 05:06 pm
Help!  
Mr. Clever completely took the reins (and also reigning on the fic)! You know, when your character behaves really well and lets himself be written. Then, he pulls out things you don't even know anything about. That's what's he's doing right now: he's says he's got a plan about something, but I don't have any idea what plan he's speaking about. There was no plan to begin with! Clever, stop pulling plot out of your arse, please. I want to do something a tad funny and not complicated. This isn't the good way to go o A o

I'm already over 1,000 words and the Doctor and Jack have yet to appear, omg XD

That and getting out of hand. Also, the sly fox likes flirting with the TARDIS... or wants to put his hands on her to disassemble her and study her every parts... Wow that sounded both quite creepy and sexual, which somehow fits well with Mr. Clever *smirks*

Anyway, no, I'm not really complaining XD I'm having a lot of fun right now, because writing Clever is a bit like writing a mix of Ten and Eleven so it's just so perfect. Also, I've got the perfect excuse for some tech-savvy terms in the narrative.

And before I finish my pause and go back to writing, here another excerpt:

"The engineers had done wonders following my directives, even though less performant than me, obviously. It didn’t help that their… fingers were so slow and so clumsy compared to my own cyberium appendices. I had to admit I missed having those (funny little things they were, all soft, squishy and so sensitive), that had been quite a fascinating experience that would repeat itself in the closest future, if all was going according to plan. Also, I was quite excited at the prospect to share my mind again, since all the boys and girls were not so wakey and more of a jumbly-rumbly hum in the back of my consciousness. It was a little bit too calm to my liking."

edit: Omg! I just thought of an awful but hilarious joke to do. I'm so going to put it in the text XD
 
 
Mood: crazycrazy
Music: namco Soundteam — Together with the Moon
 
 
 
     Mandy: Eleven - Mr Clever in Negativea_phoenixdragon on June 20th, 2014 04:20 pm (UTC)
DUDE...this is brilliant!!!!

I had to caution Irish against letting him take over, too, lol!! He does have that psuedo-sexual vibe going on...mmmm...

*HUGS*
Luo: Cybermanluorescence on June 20th, 2014 05:20 pm (UTC)
*squishes*

I must admit I did nothing to stop him to take over, I'm far too fond of him for that. What I hadn't expected was the "THIS IS MY PLOT NOW, COOPERATE" he pulled off. I'm just kinda worried about how I'll bring up the Doctor/Jack part and fear it'll end up long because of that XD

I don't think his sexual vibe is just pseudo. It feels very real to me *snickers*
Ms. Clever: Clever Allons-yirishvampire13 on June 20th, 2014 06:57 pm (UTC)
Unfortunately, the warnings couldn't help me. :D I'm his until I finish this baby. Of course, even then, I'm not entirely sure he'll release me...
Luo: whoopsluorescence on June 20th, 2014 07:04 pm (UTC)
I don't think any warning could do anything. He's too clever for that, the sly fox.
Ms. Clever: Enraged Cyberplanneririshvampire13 on June 20th, 2014 07:11 pm (UTC)
He saw us all coming... O.o
Azzie's corner of madness: Rose's mouthflowsoffire on June 20th, 2014 06:21 pm (UTC)
Hahaha, that is precious! :D Clever sounds like such a rebel! I've never written him yet, should try it sometime ;) LOVE the sexy subtext with the TARDIS, oh my :D

Lovely excerpt! ^_^

And OMFG that Ten gif again ♥ (Do you need a paid account to use those? And where do you find them? I've always wondered.)
Luo: Ariesluorescence on June 20th, 2014 06:34 pm (UTC)
You should definitely write him, he's a handful but, gods, he's just so fun to write. Careful to his moods though, because if he decided sometimes, he'll just do it and the time you notice, it's already too late XD

And he's got quite his share of sexy subtext with almost everyone in the fic, that naughty boy. Even if the subtext often comes with thoughts like "I want to upgrade them! Make experiments on them! Dissect them! How fascinating!"

You don't have to have a paid account :) You can find the one I use here here. And how to install them here o/ Also, you're welcome in advance XD
Azzie's corner of madnessflowsoffire on June 20th, 2014 07:18 pm (UTC)
Hahahaha, that's brilliant :D

Naughty thing indeed! :D Love it.

THANK YOU SOOOO MUCH. You just made my week right there :D ♥
Ms. Cleveririshvampire13 on June 20th, 2014 06:58 pm (UTC)
Join the party; he seems determined to draw all of us in, lol!
Azzie's corner of madnessflowsoffire on June 20th, 2014 07:31 pm (UTC)
Hehe… will try it sometime if I get the chance :)
Ms. Clever: Clever Allons-yirishvampire13 on June 20th, 2014 07:35 pm (UTC)
Passing on the warning that Mandy passed on to me: He's tricky, and he will invade. I hope you can handle him, because he's busy handling me. :D
Azzie's corner of madnessflowsoffire on June 20th, 2014 07:36 pm (UTC)
Hahaha… we'll see how this turns out! :D
Ms. Cleveririshvampire13 on June 20th, 2014 07:38 pm (UTC)
It will be interesting, I have no doubt. ^.^
Azzie's corner of madnessflowsoffire on June 20th, 2014 07:39 pm (UTC)
Likely will =P Rn I'm busy battling (or failing to battle =P) a River/Eleven fic, so Sexy Clever guy will have to wait a tad.
Ms. Clever: Cyberplanneririshvampire13 on June 20th, 2014 07:41 pm (UTC)
I'm sure he'll bide his time, then pick the right opportunity to spring. ;)
Azzie's corner of madnessflowsoffire on June 20th, 2014 07:41 pm (UTC)
No doubt. :D
Luoluorescence on June 20th, 2014 07:45 pm (UTC)
He always does, after all xD

(and I love how that's always spam when we're speaking about him)
Azzie's corner of madnessflowsoffire on June 20th, 2014 07:46 pm (UTC)
SPAM SPAM SPAM!
Luo: whoopsluorescence on June 20th, 2014 07:50 pm (UTC)
SPAMY SPAMMITY SPAM!

Brought to you by Mr Clever inc.
Azzie's corner of madnessflowsoffire on June 20th, 2014 07:52 pm (UTC)
MIND SPAM!

The worst of 'em all.
Ms. Clever: Enraged Cyberplanneririshvampire13 on June 20th, 2014 08:12 pm (UTC)
OMFGLOL!!! ^.^
Ms. Clever: Enraged Cyberplanneririshvampire13 on June 20th, 2014 06:56 pm (UTC)
You, too?! Oh, he's a trouble-maker, that boy! :D He'll hardly give me any breathing room, either. Every little thing you're saying about him, he's been doing the same things to me. ^.^
Luo: cleverluorescence on June 20th, 2014 07:06 pm (UTC)
I'm glad to see I'm not alone, it's kinda a relief :)
If Azzy join us, we can open a sub-section of Clever United called "Victims of His Cleverness"
Ms. Clever: Clever Allons-yirishvampire13 on June 20th, 2014 07:10 pm (UTC)
Haha! Oh, wouldn't the boy love that! ^.^